(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 7
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 7
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5 (also, variety in voice)
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . .
(7) You seem to have read the book --yes
Total (30) 28
Strong recognition of contrasts and connections between the two books. Has he grown as an author or is he pretty much just exploring the same themes over and over.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 7
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 7
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5 (also, variety in voice)
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . .
(7) You seem to have read the book --yes
Total (30) 28
Strong recognition of contrasts and connections between the two books. Has he grown as an author or is he pretty much just exploring the same themes over and over.
BRIAN SHIN'S