(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 5.5
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 6
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book yes, 7
Total (30) 28.5
Good variety of examples. Nice speaking vocabulary and work to having personality in your voice. Sometimes there is a sense that the significance of a scene goes deeper than the analysis that you are attributing.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 5.5
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 6
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book yes, 7
Total (30) 28.5
Good variety of examples. Nice speaking vocabulary and work to having personality in your voice. Sometimes there is a sense that the significance of a scene goes deeper than the analysis that you are attributing.