Oscar Wilde- Lady Windermere's Fan

(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 6
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 6
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 4.5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 6.5

Total (30) 28

___ Used characters as foils would be a better way to say this.
-- Became more interesting as you drew the comparisons.