(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency:
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . .
(7) You seem to have read the book

Total (30) 30

Wow, I love the first passage you quoted. Unexpected to hear about this as a comedy.