(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency:
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . Thank you for posting the words. It helped.
(7) You seem to have read the book -- Obviously.
Total (30) 30
Strong focus on the theme. You synthesize the many quotes well. Very good points about the cynicism. Work to do very close reading upon occasion.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency:
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . Thank you for posting the words. It helped.
(7) You seem to have read the book -- Obviously.
Total (30) 30
Strong focus on the theme. You synthesize the many quotes well. Very good points about the cynicism. Work to do very close reading upon occasion.