(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency:
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . .
(7) You seem to have read the book
Total (30) 30
You clearly read and good synthesis of the variety. Nice job finding a larger "theme." Interesting about the hypocrisy.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency:
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . .
(7) You seem to have read the book
Total (30) 30
You clearly read and good synthesis of the variety. Nice job finding a larger "theme." Interesting about the hypocrisy.