(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 5
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 4
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 6
Total (30) --25
Quick concern (question?) Did you read two books by the same author? I know you compared Huck Finn and The Prince and Pauper, and it was a good comparision. But you need two books by the same author.
Interesting about the language . . . a difficult things to do in such a short amount of time. Needed to keep the focus there, but then you jump.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 5
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 4
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 6
Total (30) --25
Quick concern (question?) Did you read two books by the same author? I know you compared Huck Finn and The Prince and Pauper, and it was a good comparision. But you need two books by the same author.
Interesting about the language . . . a difficult things to do in such a short amount of time. Needed to keep the focus there, but then you jump.