(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 7
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 7
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 7
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . .
(7) You seem to have read the book
Total (30) 30
Strong analysis right from the beginning. The allusion to the movie helped.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 7
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 7
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 7
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . .
(7) You seem to have read the book
Total (30) 30
Strong analysis right from the beginning. The allusion to the movie helped.