(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 3
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 4
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 4
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book -- 0

Total (30)

Total (30) 21
A good start. However, you discuss After Dark more than your book. Also, have you read another book by this author (other than the one done in class?)