(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 5
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 5
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 4
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 5
Total (30) 25 Some voice fluency issues (of course, some of this is due to the names). You have a complicated novel, so you spend a little too long in summary. Good specific, close reading of the two novels. It DID help to see the text. Needed to take the analysis just a bit further.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 5
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 5
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 4
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 5
Total (30) 25 Some voice fluency issues (of course, some of this is due to the names). You have a complicated novel, so you spend a little too long in summary. Good specific, close reading of the two novels. It DID help to see the text. Needed to take the analysis just a bit further.