(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 7
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 6
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 6, listen, you sound very professional, yet the details don't quite demonstrate personal interaction with the novel.
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 7
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 6
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 6, listen, you sound very professional, yet the details don't quite demonstrate personal interaction with the novel.
Total (30) 29