Technical Convention: Scream in the beginning-consistent with the war's horror
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 6
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 6
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 7
Total (30) 28 Sound very professional, though a little awkward. Good that you addressed the Lost Generation as not the theme of the podcast. A little choppy from topic to topic. Interesting call about the shrapnel as rain falling, and how all ties, of course, back to the war.
Technical Convention: Scream in the beginning-consistent with the war's horror
(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis 6
(6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion 6
(5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: 5
(5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you . . . 5
(7) You seem to have read the book 7
Total (30) 28 Sound very professional, though a little awkward. Good that you addressed the Lost Generation as not the theme of the podcast. A little choppy from topic to topic. Interesting call about the shrapnel as rain falling, and how all ties, of course, back to the war.