Sarah+&+Lynn+Comment

Evaluation -- Please complete on the person's wiki page and link to this on your page. You only need to answer 4 questions. Then do the same for your own, but add what grade you think you should get and why. Then in one -two sentences tell me something about your process of analyzing or making the video.

1. Analysis -- what specifically does the person do well in analyzing? Organization and structure of the video is clear and the purpose of each section (of the video) is definite. 2. Analysis -- if the person had to do this again, what would you recommend in analysis? He could have analyzed the poem in two separate ways--in the Biblical sense and in the light-hearted love's sense. He has a mix of both here and there. 3. What is something you found surprising? or amusing? He refers to other poems such as Shakespeare and William Carlos Williams. 4. What is something you don't understand or find confusing? We thought that the biblical reference was a bit out of place in terms of organization. 5. Comment on the visual portion of this video. Visual portion was great towards the end-- loved the way you added your own narration with the guitar!:) But it could have been better if there were more images in the beginning.