Annie+FO

 **I. Introduction
 * A. Thesis**: Victor’s creation in Mary Shelley’s __Frankenstein__ is a regular creature, but he is considered a monster in the eyes of regular people. He is therefore only made into a vicious, evil thing by the thoughts of others. It is THEM that turn him into the monster – he doesn't start out as one.

CHANGE* Point of view of the monster, point of view of the people. It is in the monster's nature to be a monster...! (other side) NO NAME - human nature to label him as a monster


 * II. Point One ** : What defines a monster? – short paragraph – is there even an exact definition that can justify Victor’s creation being called a monster?


 * III. Point Two ** : The monster is so human-like.
 * *A. Sub point ** : The monster is intelligent; he can speak, he can read, he can learn.
 * 1. Evidence 1**: Quote about the monster reading books (165)
 * 2. Evidence 2**: Quote about the monster learning the English language
 * *B. Point Two ** : The monster has feelings and can think for himself.
 * *1. Evidence 1 ** : Quote about the monster feeling neglected (171)
 * *2. Evidence 2 ** : Quote about the monster deciding to take revenge (173)
 * *C. Point Three ** : The monster was made of human bodies.
 * *1. Evidence 1 ** : Quote about the making of the monster


 * IV. Point Three ** : But the people around him treat him like a monster, and therefore he becomes one.
 * *A. Sub point ** : Victor writes down in his journal what he thinks about the monster’s appearance, the monster gets kicked out of a house, people make him realize that he’s ugly.
 * 1. Evidence 1**: quote about Felix kicking the monster out of his house
 * 2. Evidence 2**: quote about the monster saying nobody likes him because he’s ugly

Can I relate this to __Metamorphisis__ in any way?

*Use “Analysis of Frankenstein: Morality without God in Novel by Shelley” []

**OTHER CHOICES**
 * ONE**
 * I. Introduction
 * A. Thesis:** Mary Shelley’s __Frankenstein__ proves that pursuing a challenging mission and gaining knowledge is not always beneficial.
 * II. Point One**: Victor wanted to know what would happen if he tried to create another living being – clearly, things went wrong (pursuing a challenging mission).
 * III. Point Two**: Because he heard Victor’s story, Watson now feels discouraged and does not want to continue his own journey (gaining knowledge).


 * TWO**
 * I. Introduction
 * A. Thesis**: Victor takes on the role of God in Mary Shelley’s __Frankenstein__, using his power to create another living being.