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1) [] I would definitely give 5 thumbs up to this blog. We all know that college essay has something to with representing thyself in a positive way. But this person takes further step than that. When you read this blog, you can feel that you are being convinced by this person. This person has the ability to absorb the readers so much that by the end of each article, readers will most likely agree. I believe that it what college essays should be, convincing college admission officers that you would be great for their school.

__ 2) [] __ It makes a firm stand on a question: How many hours do student need to sleep. It actually starts directly with its opinion and you can notice it just by looking at the title. This blogger quotes a professor of University in health studies to reinforce his point. I agree with us (students) needing more sleeps and this person has actually made me believe in it more strongly. (I did leave a comment, but the blogger needs to approve my comment first so it may not be there by tmrw)

3) [] The topic this blogger decides to bring out is quite creepy and awkward, however, she makes a straight point. I like to note this as a 'good' writing because she succeeded in making her point absolute despite the topic is rather stupid. It is similar to when you are debating against "Rape is a serious crime" and winning.