Mike's

Mike's file @ mediafire

(7) Ideas: Insight, Textual Support, Analysis (6) Organization: Thesis, easy to follow, flows, intro, body, conclusion (5) Word Choice/Voice/Sentence Fluency: (5) Technical Conventions: something extra, no extra time, I can hear you. . . Thank you for posting the words. It helped. (7) You seem to have read the book -- Obviously.

Total (30) 30

Strong focus on the theme. You synthesize the many quotes well. Very good points about the cynicism. Work to do very close reading upon occasion.